What do David Foster Wallace's essay on wars over usage and Pico Iyer's comma personification have to do with improving students' academic writing? Everything. For all of the attention supposedly paid to Bloom's Taxonomy-with creativity at the top-educators tend to shy away from encouraging students' creative choices in areas where traditional analysis and the critic's style and tone have reigned. While we do not want our students to write inane or empty verbiage, we unintentionally set them up for this inevitability--or worse.
The movement away from children's natural creative impulses in elementary school to a direction in which they literally fit their writing into preconfigured shapes is a gradual one. Although purportedly taught to instill academic structures, these boxes are also designed to facilitate the ease with which student product may be assessed.
We need a more creative approach to teaching writing. A methodology incorporating creativity, as modeled by students in this text, demonstrates the kind of progress we are all seeking, offering an exciting challenge for young writers and educators alike.
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Dafoe presents as her central thesis the argument that "teaching our students to write expressively and well may be the most valuable lesson we can offer." She concludes that techniques for creative writing may be the best method for doing so. The author offers several chapters' worth of advice on creative-writing pedagogies, brief assignment descriptions, and sample student essays. Where her argument falls apart, however, is due to a methodological confusion. The book, while maintaining a pretense of being action research, largely consists of lore; its claims are supported primarily by anecdote or quotation of others. In particular, she relies heavily upon Peter Elbow, whose expressivist work--while foundational to the field--has been thoroughly problematized by contemporary researchers and thinkers about composition. This confusion is especially frustrating because the strongest part of the book is an intriguing chapter on how to set up action research in writing classrooms. Though the book claims an audience of high school teachers and college composition instructors, most compositionists will likely find the author's ideas problematic or old hat. The book may be somewhat useful, however, for education students looking for ideas for lesson plans. Summing Up: Recommended. Upper-division undergraduates. * CHOICE *
In her passionately-argued and critically engaging study of creative writing, Nancy Dafoe calls on her 14 years of experience as a writer and teacher of writing. Dafoe's legacy to her students shines through in her efforts to eliminate what she calls "our collective inarticulateness." Only when student writers feel personally invested in their writing can they become the voices who will leave their own legacy, Dafoe argues, and she clearly pursues the route to such a legacy through lively examples from her own experience and cogent theory. Writing is a means toward discovery; so is this book. -- Karla Alwes, distinguished teaching professor, English, State University of New York at Cortland
This book is a gift of treasured strategies, experiences and effective practices for educators at all levels in developing the art and skill of writing with 21st century learners. In each chapter, Nancy Dafoe eloquently engages the reader with the voice of an experienced practitioner and the heart of a highly effective teacher by sharing valuable insights in igniting creativity in the teaching and learning of writing. Breaking Open the Box is a timely and much needed resource for our profession. -- Donna DeSiato, superintendent,East Syracuse Minoa Central School District
Students have more to say than they realize, and being able to give them liberating choices with which to express ideas and feelings is cause for celebration. Thanks to Nancy Dafoe, teachers will no longer have to plow through piles of poorly written, unimaginative work by bored students who are not invested in their work. Breaking Open the Box restores a sense of play and discovery to the writing process. What better gift can we give our students and teachers than the means to clear and creative communication as well as the courage and pride that result? -- Gwynn O'Gara, Sonoma County Poet Laureate 2010-2012 and California Poet in the Schools since1989
Nancy Dafoe is a brilliant secondary English teacher who motivates even the most reluctant student writers. In her book Breaking Open the Box, she shares her most successful strategy for engaging students in literary analysis and the analytical writing process: providing creative choice. After applying her strategy in my own classroom, I watched as my students threw themselves into their writing and blossomed as critically thinking intellectuals. Nancy's is a must-read book for teachers hoping to help their students meet their full potential as writers and readers of literature. -- Maureen Watkins, secondary English teacher, ESM Central High School
Mrs. Dafoe has improved my writing and critical analysis abilities immeasurably. Through her guidance, mastering the true power of the English language, I learned that the best writing is inextricably linked to creativity and that stretching the limits of language every now and then is desirable-not just acceptable. Learning how to use word play and complex metaphors effectively does not come naturally, but Mrs. Dafoe makes it extremely accessible. Her methods result in a whole new world of expressive and analytical skills; the creative methods she teaches are exhilaratingly free from illusions of constraint that separate good writing from great writing. -- Thomas Marini, ESM CHS alumnus, SUNY Binghamton alumnus, medical school student
Nancy Dafoe's creative writing class provided an opportunity for existential growth that I have yet to find since. Whether we recalled the days' absurdities, noted a meaningful quotation from another author, or simply mused about a meaningful observation, our journals were about our words, our thoughts, our dreams. We were always encouraged to be creative, and yet, in offering freedom, Mrs. Dafoe brought to her lessons a specificity that required us to hone in on meaning. By the end of each semester, I felt has if I had grown as a person as well as a writer. I was able to embrace my niche to quiet the heart, a moment to decipher the whirlwind of thought, and absorb the instruction to give each heartstring a voice. -- Olivia Martin, ESM CHS alumna, LeMoyne College alumna, published poet
